Monday, May 17, 2010

Leading Line

No come-ons were needed
You peeked into my soul
We saw each other clearly
And made each other whole

No empty promises spoken
No need to ask for more
No dangers lurking in the dark
Only what fate had in store

I need a come on now
To let me know it's fine
A word of reassurance
Or my heart for you will pine

1 comment:

  1. I just was involved in a conversation the other day covering the same topic, but in your verse, it is more concise and beautiful!
    :-)

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